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You pulled my body to yours
Your lips taste like June
And your skin like summer rain
Wait for me,and I'll come-soon.

I want to know your dreams.
The ones on the inside of your eyelids
Those wrapped into the smell of my lashes
And the purple dust I'll always need.

I live for the touch of your fingers.
Then,our bodies start to burn.
I need you close,so close.
Wait for me,and I'll return.

Don't let the snow take our love.
Without your love,there is no me.
Cause I have no ordinary lucks.
And I have no ordinary sins.

You should know I'll always be there.
We left marks on each other's skin.
For us,there is no end.
I'll stand beside you when you leave.
"Wait for me, and I'll come back!
Wait with all you've got!
Wait, when dreary yellow rains
Tell you, you should not.
Wait when snow is falling fast,
Wait when summer's hot,
Wait when yesterdays are past,
Others are forgot.
Wait, when from that far-off place,
Letters don't arrive.
Wait, when those with whom you wait
Doubt if I'm alive."
-Konstantin Simonov

I found the photo on weheartit.com

I hope you will like it :D
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:iconunicycleofviolence:
unicycleofviolence Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
Wow. Right in the damn feelings. Thanks for that.
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:iconrainingmoonlight:
rainingMoonlight Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist
that's sooo beautiful *.*
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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:icontaichitwo:
taichitwo Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nicely versed , verse 3 is especialy good .
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks you,I tried :D
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:icontaichitwo:
taichitwo Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
welcome
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:iconlettherebeapples:
LetThereBeApples Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel like it started off strong, then couldn't make up what it wanted to be after the second verse. Granted, I have been told this many times myself. All in all, good piece.
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D
Art is all about being confused,don't you think? It's the way to express ourselves...
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:iconlettherebeapples:
LetThereBeApples Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
While i do know that art can be, and great art is often that.

I was always taught that art is our interpretation on that confusion.

And of course ^.^
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:iconmiralci:
Miralci Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I especially love the first part, great work :)
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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:iconkartos:
kartos Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
So wait, you used someone's photograph without their permission? You do realize this is against the TOS of the website, correct?
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
It's a picture on the internet,you try to find whose it is,I obviously couldn't...
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:iconkartos:
kartos Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Not knowing where it came from doesn't give you permission to use it. It is a direct violation of the Terms of Service of DeviantART, which clicked you read and agree to when uploading. It explicitly states here: "...Individuals who have posted works to deviantART are either the copyright owners of the component parts of that work or are posting the work under license from a copyright owner or his or her agent or otherwise as permitted by law. You may not reproduce, distribute, publicly display or perform, or prepare derivative works based on any of the Content including any such works without the express, written consent of deviantART or the appropriate owner of copyright in such works. deviantART does not claim ownership rights in your works or other materials posted by you to deviantART (Your Content). You agree not to distribute any part of the Service other than Your Content in any medium other than as permitted in these Terms of Service or by use of functions on the Service provided by us. ..."
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:iconarosedove:
ARoseDove Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Reminds me of how I UED to feel with my now ex husband, But that was about 17 years ago. I like it.
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks...
Well,memories stay forever.
Unless you get amnesia...
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:icontheeladylolo:
TheeLadyLoLo Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Your work reminds me of a lover I wish I had.
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
And maybe of a lover you will have :D
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:iconmypuppetboresme:
mypuppetboresme Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
M feelings for you are the same. In that year you hav=e done nothing, I have not seen you,or talked to you. No closeness at all, I don't believe your promise's and I don't believe you will be there for me. I don't understand why you say all these thing to me and then dissapoini
t, How would you feel darlin. am thinking about
I would love to be with you akways. You put up the roadblocjs ,and dont share with me why you put them up.
Barriers to out communication and intimacy, which I want so badly with you,and know we can get there, LU
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
That's very good written...Why is it a comment for my poem and not a work of yourself?
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:iconmalikfarooq7:
malikfarooq7 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student
....
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Is that good? :D
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:iconlocothirstydog:
LocoThirstyDog Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It appeals the romantic and the lover in me. Damn, wish my girl was right here
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Distance makes love even stronger ;)
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:iconodmichael:
odmichael Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Photographer
What does June taste like?

I was born in June, so does it taste like me?



gross
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
I was born in June too...It's one of the most beautiful months...It tastes like innocence and hell ;)You know,summer rain and thunder,flowers,chocolate and love.
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:iconjanardana:
janardana Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This really is fantastic.
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks...
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:iconthemonstermaiden:
TheMonsterMaiden Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I shivered. Love it. <3
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
I am glad :D Thanks...
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:iconofftoneverland123:
OffToNeverland123 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is beautiful!
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much...
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:iconofftoneverland123:
OffToNeverland123 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
anytime!!
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:iconswagamexsama:
Swagamexsama Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student
gosh this leaves me chills! Very nice!
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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:iconcandygirl101010:
candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Writer
this is soo beautyful i love it
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very very very very much
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:iconcandygirl101010:
candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
np
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:iconshadowsbeloved:
Shadowsbeloved Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Photographer
I understand these feelings... I miss my boyfriend... I'm glad I get to see him in 2 weeks :3 wonderful work!
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
You're lucky ;)
Distance is killing me...
Thanks....
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:iconshadowsbeloved:
Shadowsbeloved Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Photographer
Distance has been the hardest part for the last two months... But it'll be over eventually no?
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah,sooner or later...
I have to wait until Easter,I guess...
Let's hope everything works out fine...
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:iconshadowsbeloved:
Shadowsbeloved Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Photographer
It will! :)
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:iconstudio-adhd:
studio-adhd Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm currently deployed in Afghanastan. I feel as if you wrote this from me to my love ;o; I miss him so much.
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
I know the feeling...I hate these kilometers that keep people apart...
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:iconsaiyajin-hime:
Saiyajin-hime Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is beautifully written and flows very well.
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you...
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:iconsaiyajin-hime:
Saiyajin-hime Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :)
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:icontroikania:
TroikAnia Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Feels like my life right now... Waiting for my lover... Very good work though, love the phrases & the pic you found isn't too bad, either ;P
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah,I think most of the people's lives :D
Thank you...
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