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I have my inner demons.
And they are tearing me apart.
Through my rib cage,
They are eating away my heart.

I have you,holding me tight.
You can feel the pulse of my soul
I am afraid,save me.
Make those evil creatures go.

I have monsters under my bed.
They whisper only bullshit in my ear.
Their voices are so quiet for others,
But so loud for me to hear.

I feel like losing my balance,
I will fall soon,
I wonder,did Lucifer
Have his inner demons,too.

I trust them,
And they say you'll leave.
I'm falling,
It's like they want to kill.

But you caught my body,
You're the one with my soul's key.
With the color of my artery's blood
on your body,you said to me:

"Don't talk to monsters under your bed,
Cause they don't like us at all.
Sleep,I am here,my love.
They don't know what we know."
I wanted to write something different...It made me think,we all have our inner demons and well,people who love us have to learn to either make them go away or start to love them too :D

“It isn't possible to love and part. You will wish that it was. You can transmute love, ignore it, muddle it, but you can never pull it out of you. I know by experience that the poets are right: love is eternal.”
― E.M. Forster, A Room with a View

“When love is not madness it is not love.”
― Pedro Calderón de la Barca

“My soul will find yours.”
― Jude Deveraux, A Knight in Shining Armor
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Sylvano-DRAGON Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
dawww this is so beautifuuul :iconawwwplz:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much :)
sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this, such a great poem :)
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D
Gravity-bolt Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This reminds me of my boyfriend...he is always so sad and when he burst and got angry at me because i never knew how hard he works to keep in his anger,well he told me hes the demon,and I'm his angel who hasn't given up on him... Wow our inner demons and angels are beutiful aren't they?
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Writer
They are...We have to learn to love them too,it's the only way because they are part of us...
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basicfluff Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Hold up! Please don't take this personally.

Although I don't understand! Why is this so popular? The subject matter is insanely tired. Although that wouldn't have mattered had there been a fresh take on it. Not the case here.

Try harder!
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Writer
I don't know,I don't think I have read anything like this before..Are you sure you are meant to write that comment here?
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