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Look at yourself!!Look!
You're the brightest star of them all.
See,darling,you're the most beautiful one,
But still,you chose to fall.

Your wings shattered,
And your soul went black,
Did you ever regret it,my dear?
You keep it silent,there's no way back.

You left heaven behind you,
Do you miss it? I know I do,
I miss the innocence and the glitter,
The sweetness of the clouds and the truth.

I miss my wings,
Yes,honey,I lost them too.
See,when you fell,
I jumped. I fell with you.

I just wish you'd take me in your embrace,
Hold me tight and never let me go
Your sinful lips on mine,
Send me the wind and I'll know.

I can feel you all over,
My body is sinful,my soul is almost gone
I know the taste of your scent,love,
And I know your body is still warm.

And one day,I just felt the known heat;
I felt your lips on my neck,your arms around me
I looked at the mirror,how fucking good we are together.
And in that darkness,I knew,you'll never leave.
“Angels are bright still, though the brightest fell.”
-William Shakespeare


"I have decided to stick with love. Hate is too great a burden to bear. "
-Martin Luther King, Jr.

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:iconkikumizu:
I like the curse at the end, as if sealing the fate.
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dirtydancerforlife Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks. Yeah,I wanted to emphasize it. Exactly what you sad,sealing the fate.
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I've always liked and admired Lucifer, bringer of light; I quite dislike his cold, dead former master, the bringer of emptiness.
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dirtydancerforlife Dec 9, 2012  Student Writer
Yes,too bad he fell...Here,I tried to make a symbolism that he,too,can love someone...
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BelaRoseWolf Oct 5, 2012  Student Writer
This is such a sweet and symbolic poem! :) And I've always loved that quote used by Shakespeare... Amazing work~
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dirtydancerforlife Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much :D
Yes,that quote made an impression on me too :D...
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BelaRoseWolf Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! :D
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Dualitie Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Loved it!! Awesome poem, instant fav :heart:
Seriously, I want to print this out and put it on my wall next to my bed :3
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dirtydancerforlife Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
Wow thanks :D It really means a lot <3
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