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Don't come closer,I'll fall in love.
Stay away,I kill.
This dagger in my hand shines so bright.
It awakes a special thrill.

But you came closer,I fell for you too fast.
You're so close to me it hurts
I trusted you too much,
But words...They are just words.

I want you to know my dreams,
Hold them between your ribs.
You own my every paper-cut,
my wishes and my sins.

I like to bury my head in your neck
And feel your arms around me
I like your fingers in my hair
In these cold Decembers,you're my heat.

I warned you-Stay away
But I wanted you close.
You pulled me to yourself
You're my thorns and I am your rose.

You're my naked trees and the green grass.
You're everything to me,love.
My eyes' shine and heart's beat.
I'm addicted to your touch.

Don't leave-My tears beg.
Your fingers are locked between mine.
Tik-Tok,you're here now,holding me.
It's us against the time.
I will bathe in your warmth ma petite. Roll you around me until my heart beats only for you. My breath will grow warm from your kiss.
― Laurell K. Hamilton, Burnt Offerings

"You're where I want to be.
― Simone Elkeles, Leaving Paradise
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moonshield101 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student General Artist
awesome
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
huh I thought you would work something more with the dagger
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
I thought too when I started writing it. She was supposed to kill him but something made me go to the other way...
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so what changed your mind
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
Have no idea...I like happy endings.I want to believe that they exist. I was just going where my fingers were typing... I want my happy ending...
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scimini Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A happy ending is pretty uncommon nowadays, specially in this society. Until we change the way we perceive things and leave the materialism behind we can never enjoy life fully. :)

On the other hand, great poem. Reading it wasn't a waste of time; Good job!
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks,I am glad you like it :D
But,I still believe in happy endings. Nothing is that good or bad not to be real. I agree society is fucked up,but it's not about the society,it's about us. ;)
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scimini Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is about us, yet we are part of society. That being said it shouldn't be much of a trouble, the problem is that we are molded by it and our behavior is much influenced on that presumption. So in other words, if you spend your time with highly intelligent people then you are encouraged to be as well, the opposite applies as well.

I, just like you, believe in happy endings, hell I even hope for one for myself. =]
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
Can't agree more :D
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sounds like a good reason
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linas3001 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You reminded me what I'd forgotten. Thank you.
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome...And are you willing to tell me what that is?
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linas3001 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The emotion. The joy and thrill. The battle between your heart and your brain. The intoxicating uplift of the precious moments and the painful aftermath that could come. And the belief that it brings, that even in this bleak living something as strong and beautiful can happen. And that belief reminds me that it can happen again, and no matter result, it's still worth it. That I'd forgotten.
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
I guess even I had missed that,though I know it and want to believe in it. It's the truth,something beautiful will happen,cause,you know,we all deserve it. We all deserve the rainbow after the rain and thunder. Life is worth of it. Thanks for pointing it out.
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linas3001 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome. And thank you back :)
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :D
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twili-fan-barb Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love your poem :) It's amazing! :)
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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SLant22 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
It was very touching! I love it.
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks,I tried...
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
I truly love this poem. Wonderful.

On a side note, I am a Laurell K. Hamilton fan and I recognized that quote from the book right away.
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much...
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Charlieswebsies Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah! Beautifully intense and comforting to a mind that bewilderingly bored. The quotes are lovely, as is your writing. An edge of provocative mystery mingled with a bitter-sweetness. Lovely~
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Ohhh that's so nice of you to say that. Thanks :D
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Charlieswebsies Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime m'dear! I'm glad you thought it was nice even though my foolish finger's left you a typo. ^^;
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
I really like nice comments :D
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Charlieswebsies Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well good. I like leaving them. ;)
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battlebrothertherix Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Jus wow.
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
I'm guessing that's good? :D
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battlebrothertherix Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes.
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Balou-chan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Photographer
Great work!
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks.
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2626-mcalister Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
luv it so much i was trying not to cry in front of my cousin AAMAZING
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Ohhh that's so sweet....It made me happy it touched you...
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segura2112 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Love this, and I love the quote. Thank You
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome and thank you.
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Glassdefense Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
this is really deep and fantastic, I love it.
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks.
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Glassdefense Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you're very welcome, it's really great
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kspr311 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
A really beautiful poem, love it^^
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you...
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AiArisu-chan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
This reminds me of Zero and Yuki, thank you for sharing your beautiful talent!
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Really? Thanks,no problem...
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HiiroNoYuki Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
agreed I thought the same thing :)
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SpiritWolf100 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem describes my once thoughts almost perfectly. Beautiful :love:
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Oh what a coincidence :D Thanks...
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SpiritWolf100 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D You're welcome ^^
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Delicatestrength Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconsobeautifulplz: It's amazing!!! :+fav:
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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Delicatestrength Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No probs. :D
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