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Don't come closer,I'll fall in love.
Stay away,I kill.
This dagger in my hand shines so bright.
It awakes a special thrill.

But you came closer,I fell for you too fast.
You're so close to me it hurts
I trusted you too much,
But words...They are just words.

I want you to know my dreams,
Hold them between your ribs.
You own my every paper-cut,
my wishes and my sins.

I like to bury my head in your neck
And feel your arms around me
I like your fingers in my hair
In these cold Decembers,you're my heat.

I warned you-Stay away
But I wanted you close.
You pulled me to yourself
You're my thorns and I am your rose.

You're my naked trees and the green grass.
You're everything to me,love.
My eyes' shine and heart's beat.
I'm addicted to your touch.

Don't leave-My tears beg.
Your fingers are locked between mine.
Tik-Tok,you're here now,holding me.
It's us against the time.
“I will bathe in your warmth ma petite. Roll you around me until my heart beats only for you. My breath will grow warm from your kiss.”
― Laurell K. Hamilton, Burnt Offerings

"You're where I want to be.”
― Simone Elkeles, Leaving Paradise
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moonshield101 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student General Artist
awesome
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
huh I thought you would work something more with the dagger
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
I thought too when I started writing it. She was supposed to kill him but something made me go to the other way...
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so what changed your mind
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
Have no idea...I like happy endings.I want to believe that they exist. I was just going where my fingers were typing... I want my happy ending...
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scimini Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A happy ending is pretty uncommon nowadays, specially in this society. Until we change the way we perceive things and leave the materialism behind we can never enjoy life fully. :)

On the other hand, great poem. Reading it wasn't a waste of time; Good job!
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks,I am glad you like it :D
But,I still believe in happy endings. Nothing is that good or bad not to be real. I agree society is fucked up,but it's not about the society,it's about us. ;)
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scimini Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is about us, yet we are part of society. That being said it shouldn't be much of a trouble, the problem is that we are molded by it and our behavior is much influenced on that presumption. So in other words, if you spend your time with highly intelligent people then you are encouraged to be as well, the opposite applies as well.

I, just like you, believe in happy endings, hell I even hope for one for myself. =]
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
Can't agree more :D
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sounds like a good reason
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