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My heart still beats like yours
I still remember that day
The pavements were wet
But there was no October rain.

You kept my soul between your paper-cuts  
And took my kisses born in June
My soul is safe between your flesh
All of 27 grams belong to you.

And I pulled your shirt to my body
I found your lips on mine
Your fingers were in my hair
Your eyes whispered: "Forever thine".

The sheets were crumpling under us
I felt the weight of your body on me
You know my touches were begging:
"Honey,don't ever leave!"

You love me.
And make me smile.Everyday.
I didn't a thing.
You're here now,you chose to stay.

They tell me :
"This is not the way you should live"
But I have you for my own,
You're the brand upon my skin.
"-Do you trust me?
-No.
-No?
-Should I?
-Yes."

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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
Cupid <3
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HammyofFun Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist
This is beautifuly written poem! (grammar fail?)

i rarely put things like literature in faves but damn I had to put this one! Love love LOVE! :love:
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much :D
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HammyofFun Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconfabulousplz:
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AshandCinders Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I like this piece! It expresses the girl's (I'm assuming it's a girl) emotions quite well. A little editing could make this piece more polished. For example: "You're here now,you chose to stay." There should be a space after the comma.

Other than some easily fixable things, this piece is well-written. Great job!
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dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much,it means a lot...
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deadangel7 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
love it.. <3
could feel love n pain reading it...
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:icondirtydancerforlife:
dirtydancerforlife Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks,I tried :D
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Love-Hates-Me Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Every girls dream! Beautifully written
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